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You cannot pass the course without satisfactory essays.

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Some of the projects will require discovery learning. For these assignments especially, students should be prepared to think for themselves. Discovery learning means that there will be fewer instructions about the content of projects than what students may be used to from other courses. This can be frustrating for some, especially those who want a detailed formula that will guarantee them a good grade. Instead, students will be encouraged to be creative and write about what is most important to them.

However, all students will be expected to follow very detailed instructions about the form and format of the essay.

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SOME OF THE GOALS OF PROJECT ONE

honi soit motto To develop the sympathetic imagination, the basis of all ethics [see  below].

honi soit motto To unify the self: our goal is to maximize our potential by cultivating both sides of our brains, developing all our multiple intelligences.

honi soit motto  To explore some of the animal archetypes of the collective unconscious

 

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DOWN THE RABBIT HOLE:

THE JOURNEY UNDERGROUND, INTO THE REALM OF THE ANIMAL, THE COLLECTIVE UNCONSCIOUS, STEVEN FARMER MEDITATION, ETC.

 

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At the entrance to Lascaux

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in the cave

ENTER

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Swift Fox unburies a Native American Walrus Man hybrid totem in Alaska

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MOVING INTO THE ANIMAL WORLD, BECOMING ANIMAL

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AFRICA: THE ULTIMATE SOURCE

illustrated by a visit to Animal Kingdom Lodge in Orlando

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sign right outside our room!

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POPULAR CULTURE TODAY:

 


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 Finding Your Power Animal in Fight Club

http://youtu.be/boj75h3urLU

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FOX VIDEO

PROJECT ONE

250 POINTS AT STAKE 

+ UP TO 25 POINTS FOR RESEARCH

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DUE DATES:

 

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PROJECTS ARE DUE IN BLOG FORMAT IN THE P1 DISCUSSION ON CANVAS BY1:30 PM. before the 2-11 class

WHAT IS DUE: an essay in blog format* of at least fourteen-hundred words that must include multimedia (at least two images), at least two of the required citations, and endnotes (*footnotes become endnotes). Must be acceptable college-level writing.**

PENALTIES FOR BEING LATE AND/OR NOT MEETING THESE REQUIREMENTS:

if posted by 2-12 -10; if posted by 2-13 -15; if posted by 2-14 -20; if posted by 2-15 -25; if posted by 2-16 -30;  if posted by 2-17 -35; if posted by 2-18 -40; if posted by 2-19 -45; if posted by 2-20 -50; if posted by 2-21 -55; if posted by 2-22 -60; if posted by 2-23 -65; if posted by 2-24 -70; if posted by 2-25 -75; if posted by 2-26 -80;  if posted by 2-27 -85;

no credit and F in the course if not posted by 2-28

 

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3-2 P1 critiques due

if posted by 3-3 -20; if posted by 3-4 -30; if posted by 3-5 -40; if posted by 3-6 -50 if posted by 3-7 -50;  if not posted by 3-8 -100

YOUR COLLEAGUES ARE RELYING ON YOU: DON'T LET THEM DOWN.

IF ALL FIVE OF YOUR CRITIQUES ARE NOT COMPLETED BY THEN YOU LOSE THE CHANCE TO EARN 65 POINTS AND RECEIVE, INSTEAD, up to -100 WITH NO CHANCE TO MAKE THIS UP, BECAUSE YOUR CRITIQUES ARE OF NO USE TO OTHERS AFTER THEY HAVE WRITTEN THEIR PAPERS. YOUR COLLEAGUES ARE RELYING ON YOU: DON'T LET THEM DOWN.

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REQUIREMENTS:

an accurate word count of at least 1400 words (not counting quotations)

and at least two images

and at least two of the required quotations:

[a] one from a scientific account of your animal (may be from the internet) or from the course anthology section of Animal Speak; and/or the course anthology section of Spirit Animals and/or“Power Animals in Bless Me Ultima, Harry Potter, and Black Elk Speaks: A Few Examples” and/or “Totemism and Power Animals, some definitions .”

 

[b] and one from  a library book not available in any way on the internet. You may choose one of the books on reserve listed below. (Needless to say, the quote from the reserve book can not be from pages reproduced in our course anthology. )

But you will earn more points for a different kind of book about your animal such as a scientific book, for example.

In any case, you must supply complete bibliographical information for the book[s]

Books on Reserve in the PCL for This Project:

Animal spirit guides : discover your power animal and the shamanic path / Chris Lüttichau. -- BF 1275 G85 L88 2009;

Power animals : how to connect with your animal spirit guide / Steven D. Farmer. -- BF 1275 G85 F37 2004 TEXT ;

Animal-speak : the spiritual & magical powers of creatures great & small / Ted Andrews. -- BF 1623 A55 A53 1993;

Power animals : how to connect with your animal spirit guide / Steven D. Farmer. -- BF 1275 G85 F37 2004 CDROM

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PROCESS

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1. Begin with the animal.

You can use selection process you like but the emphasis should be on the animal choosing you rather than vice versa. Then you can then draw on your memories and/or the scientific observations of others (worth extra points) to establish the traits of the animal that interest you.

Here are three contemporary guided meditations that may help you find a power animal in the Native American tradition:

Steven Farmer

Shamanic

Denise Linn

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2. Be the animal

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To get a sense of the animal, in addition to your memories and your research, use your sympathetic imagination, trying to imagine what it is like to be the animal. At least 400 words must be devoted to helping us see, feel, hear, etc. as the animal does.

This of course is good practice for Project Two where you must write even more from the point of view of the animal.

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WHY? REV IEW GOALS:

[2A2a] To return to the traditional college goals of developing character and conscience.

honi soit motto[2A2b] To practice replacing fear and greed with love, compassion, tolerance, and the sympathetic imagination,which is essential to morality and ethics. Trying to imagine what it was like to be someone else is a form of experiential learning, the kind that can stick with you later. All of this depends on your willingness to be an actor, to willingly suspend your disbelief long enough to play the part. That willingness also enables you to FREE yourself from the world views that you may have inherited without conscious thought or decision on your part.* Trying out the worldviews of other cultures is the humanities equivalent of a scientific experiment. When you adopt, however briefly, another Weltanshauung, and see and feel as a member of that culture would, you test out whether any part of that philosophy of life is one you want to adopt and/or, by contrast, what part of the worldivew you inherited you may consciously want to embrace as an adult.

*William Blake called them your "mind-forged manacles"

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3. Learn from the animal (For example, what could you learn from the animal's ability to "be here now.")

Focus on the animal's traits and what you can learn from them: those that you would like to have more of yourself and those that you would like to see less of in yourself. It would be especially useful if you include traits that you need or don't need to be a better leader.

HOW COULD S/HE BE A LEADER FOR YOU?

HOW COULD S/HE HELP YOU DEVELOP YOUR OWN LEADERSHIP TRAITS?

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4. An optional, EXTRA CREDIT tertiary topic is to imagine not only what it is like to be your animal but also what it would be like to be a Native American who identifies with this animal.

[Note: "Identifies with" us does not mean "worships". Like us, Native Americans usually "worshipped" one God, such as the Great Spirit, rather than animals in general or individual animals]

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(*A.K.A. Your "Patronus"* for Harry Potter fans) *Expecto Patronum:"The conjured Patronus protects the witch or wizard that summoned it, obeys his or her commands, and fades away shortly after it is no longer required.....A full-fledged (or corporeal) Patronus takes on a fixed animal form that is often significant to the witch or wizard casting the charm......Suggested etymology: Expecto Patronum is correct classical Latin for "I await a protector". It is related to "pater" (father) and Harry's Patronus indeed takes the same form as that of his father's animagus form (a stag)." http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spells_in_Harry_Potter

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SUGGESTION

Once you have identified a possible power animal, if the eat-or-be-eaten aspects of the animal bother you or do not seem appropriate for you, you can imagine your aninmal, along with all other animals, in the Garden of Eden or some such state where there is no murder, eating of each other, etc. [If you re-read Genesis, for example, you will discover that all were vegetarians until The Fall.]

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THE ACTUAL WRITING:

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[1] Create a new folder on your desktop and name it with your animal name.

[2] Put a word.doc version of your original P1a, the one you uploaded to the Canvas blog site, titled "P1a," into the folder.

[3]  Make a single Word document of all the critiques your colleages made of your P1a on the Canvas blog site, titled "Critiques," and categorized according to the name of each reviewer.

[4] Make a word.doc titled "Revisions," of the penultimate draft of your project showing all the changes you made in response to all the critiques. You can use different fonts, color, underlining, bold, italics, to reveal what responses were made to what reviewer. Put a code at the top of the first page showing which kind of highlighting represents which reviewer.  Put this "Revisions.doc" into the folder.

[5] Finally, put a word.doc titled "Final draft" into the folder. This "final draft," must be double-spaced, with a title, page numbers, and footnotes at the bottom of the pages, using the University of Chicago footnote method assigned in our anthology (no bibliography). This final draft must meet all the requirements for images and citations and the last page shoujld provide word counts, both with and without quotations.

[6] Prepare an email to bump@utexas.edu and choose the folder as an attachment to the email. Send the email to me before class on the due date.

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HOW WILL IT BE GRADED?

HERE is a sample summary of an evaluation of a student's final P1 by the instructor*

The essay itself is marked up by the professor using the nine categories and adding and subtracting points according to the rubrics and according to the general "college-level writing" criteria here: Detailed criteria for your print version here (to be turned into the instructor).

 

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* * College-level Writing

is basically, first of all, the writing of a well-read native speaker of English with no grammatical errors and no egregious errors in punctuation and mechanics.

In the course anthology begin with "The Importance of Reading Directions in This Class."

Assuming you can write English with no grammatical errors and no egregious errors in punctuation and mechanics, what I look for the most is writing as evidence of discovery learning, of connecting new thoughts together, of hammering your thoughts into unity.

The key to this kind of writing, like all good writing, is time management, the exact opposite of doing the assignment the next before. The more time you can let lapse between different drafts of your essay the better chance you have a writing a good one. If you let enough time elapse, you will be able to return to the latest draft and see it with new eyes, make new discoveries, and new connections. In other words the key to writing is rewriting.

But you must begin writing now and sustain good time management. Review our unit on this subject in the course anthology..

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THE FIRST STEP OF THE WRITING: BEFORE WRITING YOUR FIRST DRAFT, GET A SENSE OF YOUR INTENDED UNIFYING THEMES, YOUR INTENDED PROGRESSION OF THOUGHT, AND THE STEP-BY-STEP ORGANIZATION OF THE ESSAY.

As this is primarily an autobiographical essay, you might, say, begin with your memories of this animal, whether the real animal or a cartoon version or whatever, and then move to your current age of emerging adulthood, a time when you are trying to create a new self, and state that now you wonder what that animal might have to teach you, how that animal might help you develop the character traits you want to be a more ethical person, to be a leader, or whatever your goals are.

Then FOCUS ON SOME UNIFYING THEMES, YOUR INTENDED PROGRESSION OF THOUGHT, AND THE STEP-BY-STEP ORGANIZATION OF THE ESSAY.

To help you do that you might want to look ahead at the criteria that your peers will be using to evaluate your essay, especially the first two: UNITY, COHERENCE, AND FLOW + Organization and Logical Order of the Prose

The criteria for these and the rest of the rubics is available in your course anthology, pp. 416-482 AND HERE

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A RECENT EXAMPLE:

THE HIGHEST SCORE IN E603A 2014;

AN  EARLY DRAFT

https://www.la.utexas.edu/users/bump/603A15/FoxP1.htm

Examples from E350 Animal Humanities:

Black Bear Black Panther Black-Tail Deer Butterfly Deer Mouse Doe Dog Dragonfly Elephant Hoot Owl

Lion Manta Ray Panda Screech Owl Sea Turtle Soft shell Turtle Squirrel

Examples from 603A11, which had a different organization, beginning with the self: 

 Bottlenose Dolphin Butterfly  Cheetah   Deer Dolphin   Elephant   Firefly Great Blue Heron  Monkey   Panda  Raccoon    Sparrow Spider  Tiger  Vulture  Wolf Wombat

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REQUIRED READING (250+ points)

 

38-39                       The Importance of Reading Directions in This Class

52                              Concentration vs. “multitasking”

53                              Sleep Deprivation and Multitasking

54                              Negative vs. Positive Attitude

[CF. Goleman on optimism in “Emotional Intelligence”

62                               Stress Test

63                              Tips for Reducing Stress

64                              U.T. Stress Relief Site

70-72                       Perfectionism

73-74                       Covey, Time Management form and example

82-3                          Motivation; cf. Perfectionism

84                              Goal Setting

92-93                       “Procrastination: How Adolescents Encourage Stress”

94-95         Covey, Personal Planning System, from The Eighth  Habit

96-97                       Overcoming Procrastination;

98-99                       Design Your Own Procrastination Plan

100-1                       Learning Skills Center

102                           Undergraduate Writing Center

 

WRITING INSTRUCTIONS

 

989-990           High School to College Writing Transition

991-992           Researching

993-994           Paraphrasing vs. PlagiarismWRITING AS DISCOVERY LEARNING, AS ART

PHRASES IN BOLD = RUBRICS FOR PEER AND INSTRUCTOR CRITIQUES

O= 2. Organization and Logical Order of the Prose

+V = 4. Integration of Verbal and Visual Rhetoric

995                  Writing Well is Thinking Well

996-7               Rhetorical Fallacies

998                  Yeats, "Hammer Your Thoughts";  RETHINK REWRITE ALSO ^ [

coherence]

999                  Forster, "Only Connect"  ALSO ^ [coherence]

1000-1001       Creating a Strong Thesis

1002                Structure of a Professional Research Paper

1003                "COMPOSITION," the meaning of    ALSO ^ [coherence]

1004                Introductions and Conclusions        ALSO ^ [coherence]

 

^ = 1. UNITY, COHERENCE, AND FLOW

1005-1006       Flow and Transitions     ALSO O

1007                COHERENCE, sign of an 'A' paper

1008                Transitional     Expressions

 1009               Focusing on Transitions

 

 

W=8. WORD CHOICE

USE THE Oxford English Dictionary:

https://login.ezproxy.lib.utexas.edu/login?qurl=http%3a%2f%2fwww.oed.com%2f

1010-1011       Verbs that Take Prepositions

1012                Rough Guide to Prepositions

 

P= 7.  PUNCTUATION:

1013-1023       Eats, Shoots, and Leaves: commas, semicolons

1024-1025       Quick Guide to Commas

 

DOC= 6. DOCUMENTATION

1026-1029       Chicago Manual of Style

 

W= 8. WORD CHOICE + S= 3. SPECIFICITY: 

1030                Hemingway on Rewriting

1031-1032       Hemingway's Farewell to Arms summary

1033-1056       Hemingway's Farewell to Arms 47 endings

1057                Revisions    Checklist

1058-1059       Saying What You Mean

 

C= 9. CONCISENESS

1060-1061       Diction and Conciseness   ALSO  W= 8.

1062-1063       Eliminating Wordiness  ALSO  W= 8.

1064                Readability and Clarity  ALSO  W= 8.

1065                Tips for Improving Readability  ALSO  W= 8.

 

P =PROOFREADING

1066-1068       Proofreading

1069                Why spell checkers are not enough

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